TIME FOR IMPROVEMENT

After putting together my pages for my magazine. I have looked over them and found areas which could do with improvement, For example, My Front Cover has got letters on it which are in lower case. I have now changed them so that they are all in upper case to meet conventions of magazines. On my contents page I have only used two images, the contents pages of other magazines have several images on them so I have decided to add another image. Finally my Double Page Spread was looking too lost, in the sense that you could not distinguish the difference between paragraphs and you could not read the stand first due to the blue on black background as well as lots of spelling and grammatical errors. Here are my magazine pages with the changes that I have made.

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• OUTER GLOW ADDED TO STAND FIRST
• THE BEGINNING OF EACH PARAGRAPH IS MARKED WITH A DIFFERENT COLOUR LETTER AND AN INDENT.
• I HAVE CORRECTED SPELLING AND GRAMMAR MISTAKES.